Batista Adresses the Curent world champion

[Batista]

*I walk Alone Plays as Batista Makes his way down the Ramp after his FireWorks Explode

Cole:THE ANIMAL HAS BEEN UNLEASHED!

Foley:But man Cole he dose not look happy

ColeCan you blame him he was robed out of the World Title at the last PPV and this comeing one he has a chance to win it back

Foley:True Shhh hes grabing a mic.


Batista:I should drag this out any longer than i need to.

Croud chants:Batista Batista Batista

Batista:So come Judgement Day Edge that title better not have a scratch on it When I become World Heavyweight Champion for the 3rd time!

I walk Alone Plays as Batista Makes his Exit

Cole:Well you heard it from batista him self huh you ok Mick

Foley:Yeah id just hate to be in edge's Shoes come Judgement day.

Cole:You and me both partner

[Steve Austin/Mr. Bischoff]

Ok so I know I am not exactly one of the Developmental dudes, but I do have one small bit of critique to add, leave it open ended that way your opponent can RP back and you guys can gain a little more heat making your match more likely to draw an audience (Sorry if I am not allowed to do this but if not just erase this and it'll be like it didn't happen )

[William Regal]

Yeah, you may do this...All input is welcomed

Anyway, try to explain the walk down to the ring, and also explain exaggerated arm movements and stuff like that. It all helps.

Also, don't forget, as Austin said, keep it open unless you don't want someone to reply (Which will be rarely...especially since you're on Smackdown!), this helps with storyline building and, will also help us with judging your matches. (Promos count more than actual matches on Smackdown!)

[Batista]

check my re make i think i did a little better there